Thursday, December 18, 2008

HOMEWORK READING RESPONSE QUESTION #8

TENYJAH NIBBS DECEMBER 18 2008

IS 204 833





TITLE: FAT GIRL
AUTHOR: JUDITH MOORE
STARTING PG: ENDING PAGE:
READING RESPONSE QUESTION:16
GENRE: TRUE STORY
RESPONSE:



THE MOTTO I THINK THIS CHARACTER SEEMS TO LIVE BY IS JUST NOT CARING ABOUT NOTHING. YEA THE CHARCATER IS FAT AND DOESN NOT HAVE CONFIDENCE IN HERSELF. SHE IS ALWAYS JUST LAYIN AROUND. I THINK HER MOTTO IS TO KEEP SAYING THAT SHE IS ON A DIET BUT IS CONSTANTLY EATING. LIKE I DONT FIND IT IRONIC THAT SHE IS GAINING MORE AND MORE WEIGHT BY EVER WEEK. SHE KEEPS ON GAINING WEIGHT BUT THEN WANTS TO COMPLAIN ABOUT IT. SHE KEEPS LAYING AROUND EATING MORE AND MORE FOOD AND EATING MORE AND MORE CALORIES AND STUFF. SHE IS JUST A SLOB SOMETIMES. HER MOTTO SHE LIVES BY IS THAT SHE WANT TO LOOSE WEIGHT BUT THEN PUTTING MORE AND MORE AND MORE WEIGHT EVERYDAY. SO LIKE IF SHE WASNT LIKE DOUBTING HERSELF ALL THE TIME THEN MAYBE HER LIFE WOULD BE A WHOLE LOT BETTER.

HOMEWORK READING RESPONSE QUESTION # 7

TENYJAH NIBBS DECEMBER 18 2008

IS 204 833





TITLE: FAT GIRL
AUTHOR: JUDITH MOORE
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READING RESPONSE QUESTION:18
GENRE: TRUE STORY
RESPONSE:



ONE THING THAT I WOULD CHANGE ABOUT THE BOOK IS THAT I WOULD MAKE SURE THAT THE CHARCATER HAS ALOT OF CONFIDENCE IN HERSELF BECAUSE SHE IS A FAT GIRL. I WOULDNT WANT MY CHARACTER TO BE ALL SLOPPY AND JUST DIDNT CARE ABOUT HERSELF AND APPEARANCE. I WOULD WANT HER TO ALWAYS HAVE HER HAIR DONE AND HER NAILS DONE AND HER HYGNE TOGETHER AND ALWAYS SMELLING GOOD AND KEEPING HER DRESSING SKILLS TOGETHER. I WOULD WANT HER TO ALWAYS SMELL GOOD. I WOULD WANT HER TO BE A BEAUTIFUL FAT GIRL. I WOULD LOVE TO CHANGE THE WAY SHE HAS SO MUCH DOUBT IN HERSELF. IF SHE DIDNT THINK THAT SHE WAS SO FAT AND STUFF AND SAYING THAT SHE WAS UGLY AND STUFF EVERYTHING WOULD BE OKAY. SO I WOULD BASICALLY LIKE TO CHANGE HER FEELINGS TOWARDS HERSELF.

HOMEWORK READING RESPONSE QUESTION # 6

TENYJAH NIBBS DECEMBER 18 2008

IS 204 833





TITLE: FAT GIRL
AUTHOR: JUDITH MOORE
STARTING PG: ENDING PAGE:
READING RESPONSE QUESTION:20
GENRE: TRUE STORY
RESPONSE:



WHAT UPSETS ME IN THE BOOK IS THAT INSTEAD OF ACTUALLY LOOSING WEIGHT SHE. ALL SHE DO IS SIT AROUND AND SLOPE ALL DAY LONG. SHE IS ALWAYS SAYING OOO IM SO FAT AND NO ONE LOVE ME AND NEVER HAS ANY CONFIDENCE IN HERSELF. AS A FAT WOMEN SHE NEED TO CARRY HERSELF AS A WOMEN AND NOT A SLOB. IF SHE DRESSED NICE AND KEPT HER HYGEN AND HER NAILS AND HAIR DONE MAYBE GUYS WOULD FIND HER MORE ATTRACTIVE. IF SHE CARRIED HERSLEF IN A NICE WAY ALOT MORE GUYS WOULD WANT TO DATE HER. IF SHE WAS OUTGOING AND LIKE NEVER WANTED TO STAY IN THE HOUSE AND LIKE GOING ON DATES AND STUFF. MAYBE IF SHE WAS MORE ACTIVE AND WAS ALWAYS DOING SOMETHING INSTEAD OF STAYING IN THE HOUSE AND EATING ALL DAY. MORE MEN WOULD ASK HER OUT. WHAT ALSO UPSETS ME ABOUT THE BOOK IS THAT SHE IS ALWAYS COMPLAING ABOUT SOMETHING INSTEAD OF GETTING UP AND DOING SOMETHING ABOUT HER WEIGHT AND STUFF. SHE JUST NEED TO GE4T UP AND GO TO A GYM OR GET A PERSONAL TRAINER OR SOMETHING BECAUSE IT GETS ME UPSET TO SEE A FAT PERSON COMPLAING AND KEEP ON COMPLAING ABOUT THIR WEIGHT BUT NEVA DOO ANYTHING ABOUT IT. WELL THAT IS BASSICALLY WHAT I AM UPSET ABOUT.

HOMEWORK READING REPONSE QUESTION # 5

TENYJAH NIBBS DECEMBER 17 2008
IS 204 833






TITLE: FAT GIRL
AUTHOR: JUDITH MOORE
STARTING PG: ENDING PAGE:
READING RESPONSE QUESTION: 11
GENRE: TRUE STORY
RESPONSE:

THE ADVICE THAT I WILL GIVE THE PECIFFIC CHARCTER IS THAT INSTEAD OF HER SLOPPING AROUND AND EATING ALL DAY LONG MAYBE SHE SHOULD AT LEAST GET OFF HER BUTT AND TRY TO DO SOMETHING WITH HER LIE. IF SHE DIDNT SIT AROUND ALL DAY AND WAIT FOR SOMEONE TO FEEL SORRY FOR HER OR FOR SOMEONE TO GIVE HER ADVICE ON WHAT SHE SHOULD DO, SHE WOULD BE IN A BETTER CONDITION. HER PROMBLEM IS THAT SHE DOES NOT HAVE CONFIDENCE IN HERSELF. SHE ALWAYS IS COMPLAING ABOUT THE WAY SHE LOOKS AND HOW FAT SHE IS. SHE NEEDS TOO LOOK AT THE GOOD THINGS ABOUT HER BECAUSE IM PRETTY SURE THAT SHE IS A WONDERFUL PERSON. LIKE PEOPLE SHOULNDT DESCRIMINATE JUST BECAUSE OF THE WAY SHE LOOKS. THEY SHULD JUST NOT CARE ABOUT IT AND LOVE HER FOR HER AND BE HER FRIEND BECAUSE THEY WANT TO BE. THEY SHOULDNT NOT BE HER FRIEND BECAUSE SHE LOOKS BAD ON THE OUTSIDE. SO MY ADVICE TO HER IS BASCICALLY FOR HER TO HAVE WAY MORE CONFIDENCE IN HER SELF





Tuesday, December 9, 2008

HOMEWORK: READiiNG RESPONSE QUESTiiON 4

TiiTLE: THE CAT ATE MY GYMSUiiT
AUTHOR: PAULA DANZIGER
STARTiiNG PAGE: 127 ENDiiNG PAGE: 135
GENRE: REALiiSTiiC FiiCTiiON
READiiNG RESPONSE QUESTiiON:11
RESPONSE:
THE ADViiCE I WOULD GiiVE TO JOEL iiS THAT HE SHOULDNT BE AFRAiiD TO LOVE A GiiRL. HE SAYS THAT HE iiSNT THE TYPE OF PERSON TO FALL iiN LOVE WELL. HE SHOULDNT SAY THAT BECAUSE WHY WOULD HE HOLD BACK HiiS FEELiiNGS. I THiiNKS HE iiS SCARED TO FALL iiN LOVE BECAUSE OF WHEN HiiS PARENTS GOT A DiiVORCE. JUST BECAUSE THEY GOT AN DiiVORCE HE SHOULDNT LET THAT EFFECT HiiM. iiM NOT SAYiiN FOR HiiM TO FALL iiN LOVE WiiTH EVERY GiiRL HE DATES BUT ATLEAST TO LiiKE TRY TO FiiND THE ONE FOR HiiM. CUZ iiF HE DO HE WiiLL SEE THAT HE WOULD BE SO MUCH HAPPiiER. SOO I THiiNK THAT HE SHOULD GiiVE MARCY A CHANCE.




TENYJAH NiiBBS DECEMBER 9 2008



IS 204 833




THE NARRATOR SHOULD BE RESPONSIBLE FOR HIS ACTIONS BECAUSE HE SHOULDNT HAVE KILLED THE OLD MAN IN THE FIRST PLACE. I KNOW THAT THE EYE WAS AN AGRRAVATION BUT HE SHOULD HAVE WENT ABOUT IT A DIFFERNT WAY. HE SHOULD HAVE GOTTEN HELP OR EVEN MOVED TO SOMEWHERE ELSE. MAYBE THE MAN SHOULD HAVE TRIED HAVE PREVENTED KILLING THE MAN BY EITHER AVOIDING HIM OR EVEN JUST NOT LOOKING AT THE OLD MAN. SOO I THINK THAT HE SHOULD BE VERY RESPONSIBLE FOR HIS ACTIONS BECAUSE KILLING SOMEONE IS CONSIDERED A CRIME NO MATTER IF YOU ARE CRAZY OR NOT. JUST BECAUSE THE MAN WAS CRAZY HE SHOULDNT HAVE MURDERED THE OLD MAN. PLUS WHEN THE COPS CAME TO HIS HOUSE BECAUSE THERE WAS A REPORT THAT A NEIGHBOR HEARD A SCREAM COMING FROM THAT HOUSE HE SAID IT WAS HIM IN HIS DREAM. HE ACTED ALL COCKY ABOUT IT LIKE HE KNEW THAT HE WASNT GOING TO GET CAUGHT. HE WAS ACTING ALL SLICK ABOUT IT LIKE HE EVEN INVITED THE COPS IN THE HOUSE AND SAT THEM IN THE ROOM WHERE HE HAD BURRIED THE OLD MAN BODY. BUT THEM SOMETHING STARTED TO HAPPEN. HE STARTED GOING CRAZY. HE WAS HEARING A WATER DROPS IN HIS HEAD. THEN HE STARTED PACING BACK AND FORTH AND TALKING TO HIS SELF. THEN HE TOLD ON HIM SELF. HE COULDNT TAKE IT NO MORE SO HE TOLD THE COPS WHERE THE BODY WAS BURRIED AND EVERYTHING THAT HAPPEN. AFTER THAT HE WAS TAKIN OFF TO JAIL. I THINK THIS IS GOOD FOR HIM BECAUSE NO BODY SHOULD KILL SOMEONE AND THEN GET AWAY WITH IT. IT JUST ISNT RIGHT. SO I WAS HAPPY THAT THE CRAZY MAN WENT TO JAIL.

Monday, December 8, 2008

HOMEWORK READING RESPONSE QUESTIONS 3

TENYJAH NIBBS DECEMBER 17 2008

IS 204 833





TITLE: FAT GIRL
AUTHOR: JUDITH MOORE
STARTING PG: ENDING PAGE:
READING RESPONSE QUESTION: 3
GENRE: TRUE STORY
RESPONSE:

THE BOOK MAKE ME WONDER IF THE MAIN CHARACTER THE MAIN GIRL WILL ALWAYS BE FAT. I WONDER THAT IF ONE DAY SHE WOULD DECIDE TO GO ON A DIET OR EVEN GET SUGERY OR TAKE PILLS. IT MAKE ME WONDER WOULD SOMEBODY EVER LOVE HER JUST FOR HER AND NOT FOR THE WAY SHE LOOKS. LIKE OKAY FAT PEOPLE NEED LOVE TOO. IT SHOULDNT BE LIKE THAT. I HOPE SHE FINDS SOMEONE THAT IS FOR HER. I HOPE THAT SOMEONE GUY WOULD JUST LOVE HER FOR HER AND ISNT GOING TO BE AFRIAD TO LOVE HER OR LIKE HER BECAUSE SHE HAS A WEIGHT PROBLEM. THIS BOOK ALSO MAKES ME WONDER WHY DONT SHE JUST GET UP AND GO LOOSE WEIGHT. ALL SHE DO IS SIT AROUND IN THE HOUSE AND COMPLAIN ABOUT HOW FAT SHE. MAYBE SHE JUST NEED TO GET HELP AND THEN SHE WOULD BE HAPPY. BECAUSE IF I WAS AS FAT AS SHE EXPLAINS HER SELF I WOULD WANT TO GET HELP IF I WAS HER.



Sunday, December 7, 2008

HOMEWORK 2

TiiTLE: THE CAT ATE MY GYMSUiiTE
AUTHOR:PAULA DANZIGER
STARTiiNG PG:67 ENDiiNG PG: 75
READiiNG RESPONSE QUESTiiON #: 16
GENRE: REALiiSTiiC FiiCTiiON
RESPONSE:
I THiiNK THAT THE MOTTO MARCY [ MAiiN CHARACTER] GOES BY iiS THAT SHE WANT EVERYONE TOO FEEL SORRY FOR HER AND MAKE HER FEEL BETTER. I THiiNK THAT SHE WANTS EVERYONE TO FEEL SORRY FOR HER BECAUSE SHE iiS FAT AND SHE THiiNKS SHE iiS UGLY AND THAT SHE iiS JUST A NOBODY. BUT MAYBE iiF SHE WAS MORE FLiiRTABLE AND MORE TALKTiiVE SHE WOULD HAVE LOTS OF FRiiENDS AND ALOT OF PEOPLE WOULD LiiKE HER. iiNSTEAD OF HER DOWNiiNG HER SELF AND NOT HAViiNG CONFiiDENCE iiN HERSELF SHE SHOULD HAVE LOTS OF CONFiiDENCE AND HAVE THE MiiND OF STATE THAT SHE COULD DO JUST ABOUT ANYTHiiNG A SKiiNNY GiiRL DO. SHE SHOULD HAVE LOTS OF CONFiiDENCE iiN HERSELF AND SHE SHOULD BE MORE ENERGENTiiC. BECAUSE iiF YPU DONT PLAY iiN GYM EVERYTiiME YHU HAVE iiT PEOPLE iiS GOiiNG TO THiiNK THAT YOU ARE FAT AND LAZY. SO THE MOTTO THAT SHE GOES BY iiS THAT SHE WANT EVERYONE TO MAKE HER FEEL BETTER ABOUT HERSELF AND SHE SHOULD NOT LiiVE BY THAT MOTTO

Friday, December 5, 2008

MY OPINION ABOUT THE TELL-TALE HEART

THE WAY I FELT ABOUT THE TELL-TALE HEART iiS THAT iiT iiS VERY SAD. LiiKE THE GUY WAS A WEiiRDO. WHY WOULD YOU KiiLL SOMEONE OVER AN EYE THAT THEY HAD. OKAii I KNOW THAT iiT WAS BOTHERiiNG HiiM SOO MUCH BUT HE SHOULD OF JUST LEFT. HE SHOULD HAVE NOT KiiLLED THE MAN. THE MAN DiiD NOT DO ANYTHiiNG TO HiiM. THE OLD MAN WAS SOO NiiCE TO HiiM. THE OLD MAN WAS NOTHiiNG BUT NiiCE TO HiiM. iiNSTEAD OF KiiLLiiN THE MAN HE COULD ATLEAST TOLD THE MAN THE WAY HE FELT AND THEN HE SHOULD OF MOVED SOMEWHERE ELSE. THE OLD MAN SHOULDNT HAVE HAD HiiS LiiFE TAKEN FROM HiiM. iiT WAS REALLY MESSED UP THAT THE OLD MAN WAS KiiLLED. I DiiDNT REALLY LiiKE THE TELL-TALE HEART BECAUSE iiT WAS SAD AND iiT WAS REALLY WRONG TO TAKE THAT OLD MANS LiiFE AWAY FROM HiiM
WELL THATS MY OPiiNiiON ON THE TELL-TALE HEART WATS YOURS